FOSTER, LEAH MARIE

[LEAH MARIE FOSTER]

LEAH MARIE FOSTER
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THE RP-er;;

Real Name:
Alana

Age:
21

Gender:
Girl

Experiance:
I haven't RP'd in quite a while. But I have about 5 years of experience.


Do you play any other characters on the site?:
Not yet ;]

GENERAL;;

Play-By:
Mila Kunis

Name:
Leah Marie Foster

Nicknames:
None

Hometown:
Great Falls, Virginia

Season They Were Born in:
Summer, 1994

Age:
18

Gender:
Female

Sexuality:
Straight

Nationality:
American

Job/Schooling:
Unemployed. Graduated from a prep school, deferring for a year before college.

PHYSICAL;;

Full Description:
- 5'3"
- Petite
- Tan
- Hazel eyes
- Long dark, wavy hair, lighter at the tips


Disabilities:
Does being a spoiled brat count as a disability? :P


Picture;;
Click

MENTAL;;

Personality:
- Spoiled
- Prissy
- Flirtatious
- Ambitious
- Curious
- Vain
- Conniving


Likes:
- Dressage
- Bubble baths
- Male attention
- Being right
- Winning competitions


Dislikes:
- Being talked down to
- Losing
- Heat
- Bees


Hobbies:
- Tennis
- Swimming

Fears:
- Losing

PAST;;

History:
Born to an extremely affluent family in Virginia, Leah grew up in the lap of luxury. Her family owned an expansive breeding farm, where all of her horses were born. She has been riding her entire life, and has competed in many shows on the east coast.

Bloodlines;
Mother: DR. AMANDA T. FOSTER || 47 || PEDIATRICIAN
Father: DR. WILLIAM R. FOSTER || 50 || SURGEON

EQUESTRIAN DETAILS;;

Rider's Best Event
Dressage

Rider's Worst Event
Barrel racing


Horse's Show Name: Quicksilver
Horse's Barn Name: Q
Barn: Main barn
Breed: National Show Horse
Gender: Gelding
Age: 8
Height: 15.0 Hands
Coat Color: Dapple grey
Eye Color: Brown
Markings or Brands: Dapples
Discipline(s): Dressage, show jumping
Personality: Seasoned show veteran, what some may call a "push button" horse.
History:
Pictures: Click


Horse's Show Name: Magnolia
Horse's Barn Name: Mags
Barn: Main barn
Breed: Arabian
Gender: Mare
Age: 5
Height: 14.3 Hands
Coat Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Markings or Brands: None
Discipline(s): Dressage, cross country
Personality: Spirited, quick, and talented.
History:
Pictures: Click


Horse's Show Name: King's Ransom
Horse's Barn Name: King
Barn: Stallion barn
Breed: Hanoverian
Gender: Stallion
Age: 13
Height: 16.0 Hands
Coat Color: Sorrel
Eye Color: Brown
Markings or Brands: Blaze and 3 stockings
Discipline(s): Cross country, show jumping, barrel racing
Personality: Intelligent, intuitive, and high strung.
History:
Pictures: Click

RANDOMNESS;;

Other:
Nothing I can think of right now

Theme Song:
None

[RILEY <3]

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Your character is a bit "Mary Sue" -ish. If you're not familiar with the concept, it means that the character is a bit dry and really doesn't ave a lot of depth to make them unique. The best way I've seen is explained comes from urban dictionary:

"A female character who is so perfect that she is annoying. The name originated in a very short Star Trek story that mocked the sort of female characters who showed up in fanfiction. It usually refers to original female characters put into fanfiction, but can refer to any character.

Mary-Sues are characters who are usually extraordinarily gorgeous, amazingly talented, unusually powerful, and exceedingly attractive to whoever the author has a crush on."

So if you could take a look at your character and poor in some depth, a pinch of flaws and a hint of passion in there, we'll be good to go.

[LEAH MARIE FOSTER]

Hi there! Perhaps I was unclear- Leah's flaw is that she's totally unlikeable (she's vain, nasty, and just all around bitchy). I think I tried to be more delicate about that, but I'll gladly fix it.

[RILEY <3]

Thank you very much for clearing that up a bit!

Accepted[/i]